As part of my work, I have asked for some people in my class to give me feedback on my blog., The picture inserted is a selection of notes from various people and their individual feedback on my blog.
There were mostly positive comments, commenting on how I had done good amounts of research, good detail and analysis and someone liked the fact I had to chosen to use an unsigned band, as to avoid copyright. So I am to make sure I continue to add research and keep doing detailed analysis on each post. Some constructive critism however was that I had put to many pictures onto my blog. I am unsure if I am to act on this critism however, as the pictures are of research into locations and cast amonst other things. Also, I feel it is important to show the audience of my blog all my ideas and the research I have done to finally come up with my finished film. Another comment was a recomendation of some research. According to the person, a song titled "Someday" by Nickleback contains a similar plot to my "Music Video Idea #1" story. So I am going to take a look at this video and perhaps do some research and analysis on it.
